Score: 7

"TRANCE???"

submission: Misterioso pero aventurero

date: September 4, 2008

LOL, i don't think this is trance....
but it's pretty good. The electric guitar is overpowering, and badly mixed into the song, which is why Sir Rwinius didn't like it :P
You're pretty damn good at music though, judging on the piano/strings parts. Good work.

Score: 7

"Okay...."

submission: Deasasters

date: September 4, 2008

- That first synth is VERY irritating.
....and too loud.
- Maybe have it playing quietly (With filter automation on it?) and have another melody overtop of it?

- LOL, it just became .....hardstyle.....sort of.
- To be honest, the hardstyle part's kind of boring. Your melodies are too short, try expanding them by a few bars, it'll keep your songs interesting :D

You seem to know what you're doing, just keep practicing with your melodies :D

Score: 8

"Nice, BUT...."

submission: Esdeer - Universe

date: September 4, 2008

It needs an intro
The first melody needs work, it's a bit random in a couple of places
MORE BASS
Drums volume UP, Synth volume DOWN

Sounds pretty good for a demo, keep it up.

Score: 2

"Ughhh..."

submission: Feeling The Vibes

date: September 4, 2008

I hate when I hear a lot of FLStudio basic loops in a song....

You basically put together a bunch of premade drum loops in the playlist, then added some random clapping to them...

It's still got that "4 year old playing with a drum machine" feeling

But, don't get discouraged by that. I'm sure (well, hoping) that you're new at FL, and you'll most likely improve pretty damn quick if you stick with it :D

Score: 7

"Not bad"

submission: \Fear Nothing/

date: September 4, 2008

But I really didn't like the clap being on beats 1 and 3, it really should be on 2 and 4 (IMHO).

It seemed to be lacking sounds in the subbass/bass region. Just a bunch of high frequency melodies. If you added a nice offbeat bass (Such as the "Creamy Bass" preset on Vanguard) it'd fill it up nicely.

Synths are too loud, turn them down and bring up the drums.

Score: 2

"Ummm....."

submission: The Beach (Trance Remix)

date: September 4, 2008

TRANCE?

Kinda more like noise, not gonna lie :S
Like, it COULD be decent, but all the sounds you picked sound VERY bad.

Kinda hope that this was a joke song...

Score: 8

"Not too shabby :D"

submission: Highlighter -*FvJ*-

date: September 3, 2008

- Kick needs to be brought up a lot more :D
- The cymbal (crash) sounds....not bad, just out of place? Maybe put a reverse crash before it to lead into the crash? (I'm talking about the first crash, the second time you hear it, it's fine.)
- The melody is cool, but the synth sounds kind of weird. Personally, I'd change it, but that's just my preference.
- It needs some pads!! (playing chords throughout the song)
- What vst is the bass?
- Hihats sound cool, try doing variations every once and a while, just for one bar.
- Sounds too empty. Use more samples to fill this bitch up :D (Like the ones on the VEC's 1+2)
- Too short!! :D

Ummm, yeah that's all I can come up with now, hope it was kinda helpful.

-Morgan King